This was our first completed final piece, however before we as a group published it as our final piece we thought to try and make it as satisfying as possible for out target audience we would ask for feedback. After showing this to them they gave us very helpful feedback and from this feedback it allowed us to have time to make adjustments.
The first bit of feedback we were given was that the Christmas scene didn't really fit in very well in its existing place, so we then asked them where we could place it for it to make sense.
After discussing as a group we have decided in our editing session we will be adjusting where the flash back but also add in a title saying when this was to ensure the audience know it is a flash back.
In addition, The second point in the feedback was that the title font we used didn't fit in with the physiological horror genre throughout the opening sequence. This is leading us to changing the font for the titles so ensure the font fits with the genre choice.
This picture shows how we have changed the font after receiving feedback, however this font isn't a typewriter font as a group and after looking at existing opening scenes we decided to change from a type writer font to a simple, bold and contrasting font. 
This shows how me and my group work with the feedback given and then went onto move where the flash back was to ensure there was a continuous flow of horror genre conventions throughout the opening scene. Also this makes the scene make more sense as it then beings to show the start of the film and where the story all began.
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